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安慰信英语作文写作方法和技巧

时间:2019-3-23 21:57:00
  ◎文体概述
  朋友或同学考试失利、亲友生病、受伤或由于火灾、水灾、被盗等不幸事件蒙受了损失,我们都可以写封信表示安慰。安慰信要写得真诚,注意措辞。写安慰信时一定要围绕一个中心——使收信人从中得到安慰和鼓舞。
  模板范文
  Dear Tom,
  Im very sorry to hear that you are seriously ill and that you have been in hospital for about two weeks. We are very concerned about you and your studies.
  Our head teacher is coming to see you today, so we ask him to bring you a package, with some lucky stars and colorful paper cranes in it. I hope you will like it and it will bring good luck to you. Also youll receive 10,000 yuan, which will help you pay the medical fees. Dont worry about your studies. Well try to help you make up the lessons you have missed, because we are good friends. I hope I can come and see you soon on Sunday.
  Everyone in our class misses you very much, hoping youll be well again and get back soon.
  Yours sincerely,
  Li Hua
  ◎經典句型
  篇首句:表达慰问事由
  1.I feel very sad to know that there was... 听说发生了……我感到非常难过。
  2.I was shocked at the news about the earthquake in... 听闻……地震的消息我很震惊。
  3.Seeing the related..., I could not help... 看到相关的……,我禁不住……
  4.We are so sorry to hear the news about... 听到……的消息我们很难过。
  5.I just heard that youve been on the sickness last week. 我刚刚得知上个星期你病了。
  6.I was deeply concerned when I learned that... 当得知……时,我非常担心。
  7.I just cant tell you how sorry I was to learn of your... 获悉你……时,我难以形容我有多难过。
  8.I read about the recent events in the newspaper and I am writing to extend my deepest sadness. 我从报纸上得知了最近的事情,写信表达我深切的悲痛。
  篇尾句:鼓励与问候
  1.Still you have many more chances to try. 你仍然有很多机会可以尝试。
  2.Im certainly relieved to know that. 知道这一情况后,我心中感到很宽慰。
  3.I am sure you will easily succeed next time. 我相信你下次会轻松地取得成功。
  4.I quite understand how you feel now. 我非常理解你现在的感受。
  5.Please pass my concern on to your parents. 请代我向你的父母问好。
  6.So I hope that you will not take this to heart, and will get ready to try again. 因此,希望你不要太在意这件事,准备好再试一次。
  7.I hope you like it, and that it will help to pass the time more pleasantly. 我希望你喜欢它,并希望它能帮助你更愉快地度过时光。
  8.With every good wish for your swift recovery. 衷心祝愿你尽快恢复健康。
  9.We are looking forward to/hoping/praying for your speedy and full recovery. 我们希望/祈祷你能早日完全康复。
  10.Please extend our deep sympathy to your family. 请向你的家人转达我们的深切慰问。
  11.If there is anything I can do to help you, please let me know. 如果有需要我帮助的地方,请告诉我。
  12.If you need any help, please do not hesitate to contact us. 如果你需要任何帮助,请随时联系我们。
  ◎典例链接
  (2017届山西省五校高三第四次联考)假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Jack因爸爸过度饮酒而感到非常苦恼,就此请你用英语给他写一封邮件。主要内容包括:
  1.表示安慰:
  2.给出建议;
  3.寄予希望。
  注意:
  1.词数100左右;
  2.可以適当增加细节,以使行文流畅;
  3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
  Dear Jack,
  Im sorry to hear that your father is addicted to drinking.
  
  
  
  
  Best wishes. Im looking forward to your reply.
  Yours,
  Li Hua
  【试题解读】
  1.审题立意
  该篇书面表达的命题思路采用的是应用文的考查形式,是提纲类作文,但其形式又是以邮件的模式给出,而最终又要求考生用近年来高考较为普遍的书信体裁进行写作,体现了高考命题的稳定性。
  从测试内容上来看,写作的主题为“安慰朋友并提出建议”,这提醒考生要关注生活,虽看似平淡,但事实上教育学生要关爱他人,珍惜生命。
  从写作提示上来看,试题仍然具有一定的开放性,给各位考生留出了一定的自由发挥空间,有利于考生充分展示自己的英语书面表达能力。这次英语书面表达试题还是采用了以往的书信形式, 试题中已经写好了开头和结尾,考生不必考虑和担心书信格式的问题,可以直接按照材料提示的有关内容进入主题,这有利于帮助考生增强信心,顺利答题。
  2.写作要点
  (1)导入话题;
  (2)安慰朋友;
  (3)给出建议;
  (4)寄予希望。
  3.注意事项
  (1)注意文章内容的详略,建议部分要详写,另两点内容略写;
  (2)语气要真诚中肯。
  【佳作赏析】
  Dear Jack,
  Im sorry to hear that your father is addicted to drinking. Dont worry. Im always here, ready to help you①.
  As is known, getting rid of drinking is not easy, so you should be patient with it and give your father a little time. First of all②, find out why your father is addicted to drinking and try to communicate with him about this. Then②, you should think of ways that fit your fathers situation. Maybe changing your fathers taste, like drinking tea instead of wine, is a good choice③. Besides②, it is important to make your father know the potential danger of drinking. Also②, you can ask doctors for help. I hope the suggestions are available④ to you and your father will be happier and healthier with the help.
  Best wishes. Im looking forward to your reply.
  Yours,
  Li Hua 亮点分析:本篇习作将建议一条条列举出来,使人一目了然,且思路清唽,交代非常清楚。字里行间情真意切,读来非常感人。运用了一些适当的过渡词及高级句式结构,如形容词短语作状语、动名词做主语、定语从句等,同时
  available等高级词汇的使用,也使文章增色不少,总的来说是一篇好文章。
  ①作者没有用两个简单句或并列句的形式来表达,而是独辟蹊径,使用了形容词短语ready to help you作伴随状语。
  ②作者用First of all、Then、Besides和Also等过渡词一条一条地陈述他的建议,层次分明。
  ③作者在此用动名词形式changing your fathers taste作句子主语,后面还对这个做法进行举例,语言运用非常老道。
  ④作者在这里运用了高级词汇available,一词胜千言,言简意深,足见作者的语言能力。◎小试牛刀
  假定你是李华,你收到美国好友Jack的来信,他说他期末考试考得不好,受到父母的批评,情绪很低落。请你根据以下要点给Jack写一封信:
  1.安慰对方;
  2.正确对待考试;
  3.与父母多沟通;
  4.鼓励对方。
  注意:
  1.词数100左右;
  2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
  Dear Jack,
     
  Yours,
  Li Hua